I know the add at the bottom is a bit big. I will stop adds altogether next time.

14 children? That's a pretty productive guy.... Anyway, once again excellent work! 

14 children? That's a pretty productive guy.... Anyway, once again excellent work! 

He's 55 and the LCPD always can use more bodies. Use some imagination! ROFL LMAO Thanks.

Very well written!

Dat blue banner be hurtin' me eyeZ

Dat blue banner be hurtin' me eyeZ

Yeah I don't like it either. It was a last-minute edition that didn't show up as well as i'd hoped. I won't have adds in the next article.

Yeah I don't like it either. It was a last-minute edition that didn't show up as well as i'd hoped. I won't have adds in the next article.

I still think you're articles are very well put together.

Awesome work! 14 children at 55? That man went to work on his wife. Rofl

 

And I hope he's being cremated, because 3 weeks and one day is a long time to hold his body for a funeral! ;)

 

Also a bit of constructive criticism; I would've suggested fixing the ratio of the headline/picture, because it's a bit stretched out.

Great job   

I really like your stories, keep them coming!

First i belived it was a real story when i read "Fatal- etc..". 

-snip-

 

Also a bit of constructive criticism; I would've suggested fixing the ratio of the headline/picture, because it's a bit stretched out.

 

Sure thing. I will be trying something new for the headlines on Fridays Article. I'll see about Monday's too. I dunno yet.

Cool!  Thought it was the real thing at first.

 

DrDetroit

Very interesting. I like the idea of making up a newspaper story. I might give it a shot.
How to get started...

Thanks guys.