I started work on a skin today that I thought I should post here for some delicious feedback. It's a skin bearing a fictional livery of the Liberty City Highway Patrol, and is created for the GTA V Vapid Stanier Second Generation Police Interceptorator in this pack:

 

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Here are some screenshots of the first in-game test.

Linking because the screenshots are big and this post editor is giving me the bird.

 

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So, some main things. I do plan to keep the body all white, and the color is probably going to remain as well, but hopefully I can make this skin look a lot better with people's help. I might have a couple ideas to fill out the empty side space, but I'd like to hear feedback first.

Edited September 22, 201411 yr by imadoofus

I would recommend you to put the Police text on the bonnet a bit more to the grille. They usually don't sit in the middle. 

I would recommend you to put the Police text on the bonnet a bit more to the grille. They usually don't sit in the middle. 

 

It's a little closer to the grille than it looks. Still, I'll try and fit it a little closer.

I think it looks pretty good, nice a simple. =)  My suggestions: like Officer Vic said, move the text on the hood much closer to the front of the car; and make the roof number much bigger.  I generally like to add the unit number somewhere on each side of the car, but that's just me, it's of course up to you.

Edited September 22, 201411 yr by sixium

I think it looks pretty good, nice a simple. =)  My suggestions: like Officer Vic said, move the text on the hood much closer to the front of the car; and make the roof number much bigger.  I generally like to add the unit number somewhere on each side of the car, but that's just me, it's of course up to you.

 

I actually did do that; I should have included a side screenshot. The number is on the very front of the sides, in front of the front wheel.

 

Front front front front front.

I actually did do that; I should have included a side screenshot. The number is on the very front of the sides, in front of the front wheel.

 

Front front front front front.

 

Oh cool =)

Do you guys think the line after the "DIAL 911" text is necessary?

Do you guys think the line after the "DIAL 911" text is necessary?

 

Na. How about this way?

 

Here's the edits I've made:

 

 

It still looks empty to me. I'm thinking something near the front, maybe a US flag or something.

Haven't had much time to work lately.