Xander6478

He placed his Tail lights in the wrong order in the hierarchy when making the car

@KuchoYou're the one that needs to calm down in your review. I even mentioned that I didn't know if he was aiming for accuracy or not so I wouldn't take that into account in the review. I made it sound as calm as I possibly could. I was writing it to help him not to degrade his work. Most of the stuff I put in my review wasn't even personal preference things, it was things that should be a fixed as that should be the minimum standard for all cars such as wires going nowhere, purple/green texture and stuff clipping through the car. The review isn't an attack at all and just because I leave a lower rating than everyone else because I decide to actually review the car doesn't mean I'm an asshole. Edit: Lumpkin County GA has 2 reds in the back so it's not all blue.

Before you read any of this no I'm not picking on you or bashing your work. I'm simply trying to help you out by telling you what's wrong and how to fix it. If you have an issue with that then tough you don't have to read what I post. I took an interest in your pack since I saw " Lumpkin " in your title and I myself am doing a mini pack of their cars as well so I wanted to see what yours look like. Now I don't know if you were going for an accurate pack or just wanted to use their liveries so I won't take that into account but if you were re creating their IRL cars then there is a lot that is wrong and so feel free to pm me and we can talk about it. Now to get onto what's wrong with your models specifically. Like I said I'm here to help you and all the stuff I'm gonna talk about you can easily fix and it should be doable. 1. Crown Victoria Pushbar is mounted improperly. There's specific brackets that go into the bumper filling so all you'd need is to move it up high by a tiny bit, that's about it. 2. The Ions on all your cars are way too small. If you're looking to scale something to the correct size then an easy way to do that is to find the items measurements online, then convert those measurements into metres and make a box in zmod3 with those dimensions. Once you have that just scale the object so it fits into that box and it should look good. 3. Pretty much all the cars and most of your objects have purple or green textures when they should be a shade of black/grey. To fix that issue go into your ytd and make those textures be in a8r8g8b8 pixel format. If you want the livery to not be purple as well then change it to the same pixel format with mipmaps set to 1. 4. The brackets on all the cars for the lightbar are completely off. The brackets for the lightbars should by fitted just above the door, PM me for me detail if you want to know. 5. A lot of your wires seems to be going nowhere which I personally hate. I understand sometimes emergency car outfitters drill holes in places to run wires but it's look bad on gta cars so I'd recommend running them through holes already in the car. 6. Pretty simple one, Centre consoles just floating. 7. I think this is just my personal preference but the interior equipment in some of the cars just looks out of places. Especially on the SUV's the wires once again seem to be going nowhere. 8. Noticed some things clipping such as the front antenna for the radar. Just make sure to always check over your car and make sure everything is good. Lastly just to give you a tip, I tell this to pretty much everyone and I was told this myself. Take time in your cars and take pride in what you make, don't rush it to make a pack. I started modelling 6 months ago and I haven't released a thing yet because I keep improving and I don't want to release something that just isn't good or something I haven't taken care in making. Hope this helps you a lot and trust me if you stick to it you'll improve over time. Also, I will be more than happy to change my rating once you update the cars, no issues in doing that. Hope you have fun modelling and good luck. Edit: Grammar stuff because I'm a retard.

HE CALLED THIS PACK HERE " LAPD PACK " AND THEN CHANGED IT AFTER HE WAS TOLD TO " FICTIONAL ".

You realise he changed the title ?

Makes me look tactical I like it

This one's staying in my game for a while.

Another big boy car, wow this is amazing. You're killing it prodigy.

That's definitely not how you mount seat organizers, that shit 'bout to fly the fuck off.

Cool

Yo I gotta ask fam, what is that fucking thing on the back. I'm really interested in what it does.

I always love to see more EUP stuff being released so I love it. As for the uniform, the black you have on the shirt is more of a dark blue like the trousers but other than that keep making more stuff.

Turn the lights off, Make it day time and show us the livery.

Oh my god, This is gonna fit in my game so good. Thank you !

Personally I'd just have the shoulder mic. Good job any ways, EUP needs new good stuff like this and your belt.

I love the shoulder mic but I gotta say, personally I hate that bodycam. Other than that it's perfect.