Well, this is my peice of work, inspired of BRAVO9 ACTUAL's stories, and i am going to share. 

Well, what do you think? link: '>

Edited December 23, 201312 yr by Officer Vic

I think it's well written but I would check for spelling error's. Other than that I do like it

I think it's well written but I would check for spelling error's. Other than that I do like it

Alright, my spelling aren't the best, i should use spellschek more often...

"an police maverick, under..."

 

"All Airlines should be redircted...pass trough Alderny...Swedish couple says: We was suppose..." ===> "All airlines...redirected...pass through...says: We were..." (unless you meant to make it so that Swedish don't speak very good English...)

Edited December 13, 201312 yr by eric35

well   other members said it for me, good but CHECK SPELLING

looks like Bravo has some competition now 

Edited December 13, 201312 yr by gamerdanger99

I get it, use spellchek. Any more i should think on?

EDIT spelled "spellcheck" wrong #fail.       

Edited December 13, 201312 yr by Officer Vic

Title needs checking, not spelling tho...

I think this was absolutely hilarious!

 

"YOLO Motherfuuuuuu-"

"an police maverick, under..."

 

"All Airlines should be redircted...pass trough Alderny...Swedish couple says: We was suppose..." ===> "All airlines...redirected...pass through...says: We were..." (unless you meant to make it so that Swedish don't speak very good English...)

I am swedish myself so that i'll keep in mind.

*I meant if you meant to make it so that the Swedish couple don't speak perfect English, I am not saying Swedish don't speak good English. Apology if what I said was misleading. 

Edited December 14, 201312 yr by eric35

*I meant if you meant to make it so that the Swedish couple don't speak perfect English, I am not saying Swedish don't speak good English. Apology if what I said was misleading. 

No problem, we all make mistakes.

While I already had seen this before everyone else, just wanted to pop in here and say: Nice work! 

I think this was absolutely hilarious!

 

"YOLO Motherfuuuuuu-"

Thanks!

 

looks like Bravo has some competition now 

But he is still the best.

 

While I already had seen this before everyone else, just wanted to pop in here and say: Nice work! 

Thank you!

My, new censored one. Old one got deleted. 

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