I have this video of mine... I don't feel right about how it came out.

I need your opinions and criticism!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zDFkLpoGGc0

The video it's cool, good job :).

Seems good to me.

Thanks, still hoping to get more feedback. Hopefully more people will see this topic. :tongue:

PERFECT! As my real world job is video production! Let me pitch in, and give you some feedback :)

Disclaimer: Oly, I love you, so I am not trying to offend you if I do say something that you may find harsh, its just that, harsh critisism goes farther than me saying that I loved every second of it. This is to help you, not to make you feel bad :)

The Good:

~ Great use of the voices in game (Niko and Clerk)

~ Great angles during the foot, and car chase scenes!

~ Great angle at 1:01, 1:18 , 2:13 - 2:25

~ Great Driving @ 2:45, 3:07, 3:09

~Good music for the driving scenes!

~ Loved how the back lamp when out just as the video ended, great addition

The Bad:

~ The trick @ 2:36 was kind of what I like to call "Pointless showoff-y shot" Not necessary

~ When you were in TW@, Niko went from the front of the store, to the back, without any showing of him walking back there.

~ @ :57 it looked like he was shooting THROUGH the register

~ @ 1:01 the car door kind of glitched, just a simple thing, not that bad

~ @ 1:44, try to bring the camera lower to show that is Niko's car, and him driving away.

~ I honestly didnt like the ending...

The Ugly:

~ When Niko ran out of TW@, it looked like he took A LOT of bullets.

~ Try to crop out the Rockstar watermarks, if you use Sony Vegas or any other editing program that can crop.

~ Change the titles of the video clips to something more telling (Not like "LOL"

~ The music before the car chase was not very good for the setting it was in. Look into "X Ray Dog"

~ 3:30 and 3:33 were shots that really had not purpose I think, or I didnt understand why they were there.

After taking all this into consideration, and watching the video several times, I give it a:

8/10

Great work, one of the better videos I have seen made with GTAIV. Please keep it up!

WE NEED TO DO A CO-LAB VIDEO SOON! Also, can I get the default police car files from you?

Edited December 26, 201015 yr by JetlinerX

PERFECT! As my real world job is video production! Let me pitch in, and give you some feedback :)

Disclaimer: Oly, I love you, so I am not trying to offend you if I do say something that you may find harsh, its just that, harsh critisism goes farther than me saying that I loved every second of it. This is to help you, not to make you feel bad :)

The Good:

~ Great use of the voices in game (Niko and Clerk)

~ Great angles during the foot, and car chase scenes!

~ Great angle at 1:01, 1:18 , 2:13 - 2:25

~ Great Driving @ 2:45, 3:07, 3:09

~Good music for the driving scenes!

~ Loved how the back lamp when out just as the video ended, great addition

The Bad:

~ The trick @ 2:36 was kind of what I like to call "Pointless showoff-y shot" Not necessary

~ When you were in TW@, Niko went from the front of the store, to the back, without any showing of him walking back there.

~ @ :57 it looked like he was shooting THROUGH the register

~ @ 1:01 the car door kind of glitched, just a simple thing, not that bad

~ @ 1:44, try to bring the camera lower to show that is Niko's car, and him driving away.

~ I honestly didnt like the ending...

The Ugly:

~ When Niko ran out of TW@, it looked like he took A LOT of bullets.

~ Try to crop out the Rockstar watermarks, if you use Sony Vegas or any other editing program that can crop.

~ Change the titles of the video clips to something more telling (Not like "LOL"

~ The music before the car chase was not very good for the setting it was in. Look into "X Ray Dog"

~ 3:30 and 3:33 were shots that really had not purpose I think, or I didnt understand why they were there.

After taking all this into consideration, and watching the video several times, I give it a:

8/10

Great work, one of the better videos I have seen made with GTAIV. Please keep it up!

WE NEED TO DO A CO-LAB VIDEO SOON! Also, can I get the default police car files from you?

I really and i mean REALLY, appreciate your feedback. Big fat +1 for you! Also, i really wasn't serious about the 1st song so much. And thanks for the music tips. I'll sen you a link for the original police car files, just send me a PM about wich ones you need.

I also might try re-take some of the shots as i still have all the files.

Also, about the ending. I wantet to make up something simple, like now the watcher can decide what happened next and what happened to niko.

For the watermarks part, i found a mod wich removes them.

Also, about the part 3:30 and 3:33 i had to cover up one fail i did while charging towards the stairs.

Brb, going to edit camera positions, edit some music and try fixing some issues and add something new.

Good to hear, I am glad to help you with anything of this kind, after all, its my job!

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Great job Mr. Olanov

Thanks for the feedback everyone, just get ready to give me some more of it because, right now i'm rendering this same video, edited with new music, audio effects and different shots.

Here it is now, feedback please? :smile:

Its a lot better than the first, fixed music, views, audio and such.

Hey!

First of all: Great work! I really like the vids ;)

The second one is even better than the first one - I really like the music/audio effects in the beginning and at the start of/during the car chase (when Nico's in the car on that bridge-like-thing)

But I don't really like the ending :/ Dunno why but I expected some more action, some "big boom" (not literally but... you know^^)

Hey!

First of all: Great work! I really like the vids ;)

The second one is even better than the first one - I really like the music/audio effects in the beginning and at the start of/during the car chase (when Nico's in the car on that bridge-like-thing)

But I don't really like the ending :/ Dunno why but I expected some more action, some "big boom" (not literally but... you know^^)

Don't worry, you'll be seeing a big boom in the next part (: