Hello! My name is Mason A. and today I wanted to show off some Of my First work ever. Can you guys Take A second and rate it? If you Like it join my discord: https://discord.gg/k3JYNed If you enjoy.

 

https://pasteboard.co/Jrfh0mE.jpg

https://pasteboard.co/JrfhqN6.jpg

 

Thanks! ❤️

First off, these are some lovely screenshots.

For the first one, I would rate it at a 9/10. I took off a point because the image itself is a little grainy. Although, that could just be because of how large the image was stretched to.

For the second one, I rate it a 8.5/10. Beautiful crisp image, but I would change the text to either "Join the National Park Service Today!" or "Join the NPS Today!". Just seems a little more formal and realistic.

Hope This Helps! 🙂

5 hours ago, UnknownBastion said:

First off, these are some lovely screenshots.

For the first one, I would rate it at a 9/10. I took off a point because the image itself is a little grainy. Although, that could just be because of how large the image was stretched to.

For the second one, I rate it a 8.5/10. Beautiful crisp image, but I would change the text to either "Join the National Park Service Today!" or "Join the NPS Today!". Just seems a little more formal and realistic.

Hope This Helps! 🙂

thanks!

 

Talking about the first picture, it’s probably streched out due to pasteboard because it was fine when I made it.

 

And about the second one, game warden is also a real life thing so I think it’s pretty much the same, they also deal with people hunting without licenses, or people without off-road license etc. 

So in my opinion it’s alright. 
 

thank you for the feedback though! 

8 hours ago, Mason A. said:

thanks!

 

Talking about the first picture, it’s probably streched out due to pasteboard because it was fine when I made it.

 

And about the second one, game warden is also a real life thing so I think it’s pretty much the same, they also deal with people hunting without licenses, or people without off-road license etc. 

So in my opinion it’s alright. 
 

thank you for the feedback though! 

Most likely,it just looked a little stretched but it was probably just the upload. Idk.

As for Game Warden, it just looks a little weird. Guess Im just not a fan of the wording.

9/10 for both!

 

I really like the second one with the straight shot of the bumper. The image is nicely balanced and aesthetically pleasing. 😃