BRAVO 9 ACTUAL 96 Posted December 3, 2013 3 PenguinJr, 42069 and McAwesome6934 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
gamerdanger99 153 Posted December 3, 2013 Great job bud i really enjoy reading these Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Empire 76 Posted December 3, 2013 damn, it gets better and better, That's another great story Quote Hide Empire's signature Hide all signatures www.baysidegamers.com Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hilth0 242 Posted December 3, 2013 Arrest? He is beating the man to death. 3 42069, SgtMckinson and BRAVO 9 ACTUAL reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MissouriTrooper 1 Posted December 3, 2013 Great job bud! Really nicely done Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BRAVO 9 ACTUAL 96 Posted December 3, 2013 Arrest? He is beating the man to death. No no no. He's still alive. I even ran him over. He was glitched. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MayhemMercenary 379 Posted December 3, 2013 Really cool! I enjoyed reading that. Before someone criticizes you, I would change "demestic" to domestic and "tazered" to tazed. I am doing this in a friendly fashion, not trying to be rude. Other than that, nice job! 2 BRAVO 9 ACTUAL and GspColonel reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BRAVO 9 ACTUAL 96 Posted December 3, 2013 (edited) Domestic was a typo. The tazered is staying. It sounded proper. Tazed didn't fit grammatically. Thanks for all of the response guys! Makes me want to keep it up! Edited December 3, 2013 by BRAVO 9 ACTUAL Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ineseri 5155 Posted December 3, 2013 Yes awesome! And you kept the Liberty Tree styling, nice to see it! Looking forward for more stuff from you.. :) Quote Hide ineseri's signature Hide all signatures "Don't quote me on that" - ineseri Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JewishBanana 396 Posted December 3, 2013 This is exactly the kind of thing that fits well into the Rockstar humor genre. It's the crazy and idiotic things like this that made up GTA IV. Very nice too. Defiantly think you should continue doing this because it really makes a lot of people happy! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
0taku 2081 Posted December 3, 2013 Very cool news story, but did you have to use all caps for the topic Quote Hide 0taku's signature Hide all signatures if your replying to me Please @0taku or Quote me so I get a notification Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
42069 664 Posted December 3, 2013 Hahaha, I love these and I totally agree with Jewish_Banana Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BRAVO 9 ACTUAL 96 Posted December 3, 2013 Very cool news story, but did you have to use all caps for the topic Lesson 1 that we were taught in High School for writing articles was to have and BOLD attention-grabbing headline to attract readers. I would say that in this instance it served it's purpose quite well, wouldn't you? I the future I will writing it normally though. I value your input. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
